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托猛前滑尼大学毕业后决定自己开业。一开始好多银行家都拒绝了他的贷款请求。枝腊但他毫不悔森泄气，继续一个一个拜访银行家寻求帮助。有一位银行家被他的决心所打动答应贷款给他。如今他成了富商。在谈到所取得的令人惊奇的成就时，托尼说最重要的是创造机会而不是等待机会。
Tony decided to start his own business after graduation. At first, many bankers refused his loan request. But he was not discouraged, and continued to visit bankers one by one for help. A banker was moved by his determination to promise him a loan. Now he is a wealthy businessman. Talking about the amazing achievements, Tony said that the most important thing is to create opportunities rather than wait for them.（经过“迅捷在线翻译”配合做的修改后的翻译）

翻译:Tony decided to start his own business after graduation. At first, many bankers refused his loan request. But he was not discouraged, and continued to visit bankers one by one for help. A banker was moved by his determination to promise him a loan. Now he is a wealthy businessman. Talking about the amazing achievements, Tony said that the most important thing is to create opportunities rather than wait for them.

重点词汇释义
托尼
Taney [英格兰滑梁人姓氏] 住所名称，来源于高卢信坦运语，含义是“栎树，冬青”+地点后缀acum; Tawney [英格兰人姓信氏氏] &L[Taney]的变体; Toney [英格兰人姓氏] 来源于中世纪教名，Anthony的词首元音脱落; Tony [男子名] &L[Anthony,Antony]的昵称
大学毕业
university graduated
一开始
in limine; at the very start
泄气
frustrating; disappointing; lose heart; feel discouraged; staleness
寻求帮助
ask for help
贷款给
lend
富商
merchant prince
最重要的是
most important of all; above all
创造机会
create openings
而不是
instead of, rather than, other than

托尼在大学毕业后决定自己创业。起初，许多银行家都拒绝了他的贷款请求。但他毫不泄气，继旁含续一个接一个地拜访银行家寻求帮助。有一位银行家棚段被他的决心所打动，同意贷款给他。如今他成了富商。运和笑在谈到所取得的令人惊奇的成就时，托尼说最重要的是创造机会而不是等待机会。

Tony decided to start his own business after he graduated from college. At first many bankers turned down his request for a loan. However,he was undaunted, continuing visiting bankers one by one for help. A banker was impressed by his determination and agreed to lend him money. So far he has become a rich businessman. Talking about his amazing achievements, Tony said that the most important thing is to create opportunities instead of waiting for them.(配合翻坦颤译软件做氏拆小修歼信枣改)

Tony decided to start his own business after he graduated at the university. A lot of bankers rejected his loan applies at the beginning. But he never gives up, he was continuing to visit bankers one by one and searching for their help. One of the bankers was moved by his determination and decided to loan to him. Now he becomes a rich businessman. When he was talking about his amazing successful, Tony said that the most important thing is to create chances but not to wait for chances.