英语作文,急求。

Dear Tom
I am your penpal Ganglin Zhao. You know what, I participated an English Corner activity last week and it was wonderful and extremely helpful in improving my English. The activity was held at Lawrance Hall 6:00pm with both students and professors presence. The content of the English Corner turned out to be full of excitement, there were a great many activities that kept you occupied, such as reading English newspapers, practising speaking with other people learning how to sing English songs and so on were extremely helpful. The improvement of my English by getting involved in the activities are demonstrate in variety of ways. I feel my English speaking has significantly improved. Compared to sitting in the corner silently, now I am able to speak in English in class confidently. What a great achievement

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