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Local University or Non-local University？
Nowadays，an increasing number of students start to discuss such a topic "How to choose between local university and non-local university ?"
Different people have different opinion in this different choices.Some individuals prefer to the non-local university rather than the local because it may practice our independent living ability,and provide a large number of chances of making friends.Furthermore，it will make us obtain increasingly number of abandant and helpful experience.On the contrary,others believe that choosing the local university has much more advantages than the other choice.
At first,they feel that living next to parents have capable of caring for each other.Secondly,we have acquaintance with the wonderful environment and it will make a contribution to our study.
Last but not least,it will save a waste of unnecessary accounts.
From my point of view,I prefer to the first reason,beacause of my independent quality.
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